Tuesday, April 21, 2009

response by Elmer Guerra

grand pa says that all boys should have to chop down a tree because it teaches them datermination. Describe an exprience in which you had to "chop down a tree" an explain how you gained daetermination and power.

the time i had to "chop down a tree" is when I wanted to get the wii . I started easy by recycle cans/bottles and i used to get like $15 through $20 dollers. Then when i found coins I got them and put them in a bag and then put it in this machine in cvs and the mashine will give you the same money but in bills. What I learned is how hard the parent has to work just to make money so now I take better care of my things not like how i used to. that is when I had to "cop down a tree".

1 comment:

  1. Review By Emmanuel Aldana
    Name of Author: Elmer Guerra
    First of all I would like to point out you spelling.Lets try to work on our spell checking, maybe you could press the button on the top right of the response panel. Just look through all the buttons on top of the response until you reach a button that says spell check. Other than that your story was very inspirational. Good Job =^_^=

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