Thursday, April 30, 2009

response by Duncan Mckinnon

So far this book has been really good. My favorite part of the book is when Billy saves up for the two dogs Old dan and Little Ann. And my other favorite part is when Billy goes hunting in the winter and Little Ann falls into the water and Billy rescues her. That shows that Billy really does care for his dogs.
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  1. 6th Grade Reading BlogMay 5, 2009 at 1:41 PM

    Critique by Cytlaly Munoz
    I agree with you that those are very interisting parts in the story.I see what you mean with that these parts of the story show that Billy really cares for his dogs.I think you should be a little careful of how you start your sentences but over all it is very good.

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