Thursday, April 30, 2009

Response by Eric Lopez

I think that my favorite part of the story is when Billy got his dogs. I like this part because Billy after two years finally gets a dog. I always wanted a dog but I got a cat instead. I like the cat so I don't care any more about having a dog. 
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  1. 6th Grade Reading BlogMay 5, 2009 at 1:35 PM

    Critique by Emily Camacho

    I like how you put a personal connection into your journal entry. I suggest that you combine the third and forth sentence.

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